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adjusting the sails's avatar

This piece does such a good job of describing the emotional whiplash of early dating stages. I loved it (and the cover art too lmao).

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Aggghhhhh thanks so much for reading!! I’m so glad this resonated!! Credit to my brother for the cover art idea

Jacob Hamermesh's avatar

Elite content, per usual

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Jacobbbbb my loyal and longtime reader, glad you enjoyed!!!

GHawks's avatar

Loved this writing! And very impressed with how you did not bury it when he things started getting weird and extracted yourself. You know nothing, Tony from Bensonhurst x

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Thanks sm for readingggggg so glad you enjoyed xxxx

Martina Madani's avatar

Always such a great read!!

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Thanks Martina!!!

Luc’s Brain's avatar

This is such an amazing piece and Tony was weird! Good riddance!

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Thanks sm for readingggggggg! Byeeee

Becky Hoving's avatar

YUCK. It’s crazy how quick things can go from picture perfect to nightmare, that flip of the switch in early dating always sends a shiver down my spine. I was HOOKED on this

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

it’s the stomach drop!!! Thanks so much for reading; I’m so happy you enjoyed!!!!

Wanderer Oblong's avatar

Ahhhh she’s back!! I love reading these

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Thank you!!!!! Thanks for reading!!!!

Rosie Posie's avatar

Loved as always

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Thanks boooo thanks for reading!! Means the world!!

Emmie Dru Webb's avatar

I am OBSESSED with you and your writing!! I was locked in from the top!! You are going to find someone so special!!!

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

THANK YOUUUUU!! Thanks for reading xxxxx

Selina's avatar

Thanks for sharing, sending hugs your way <3

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Thanks for reading xxxxx

The Disfrutona Diaries's avatar

This makes me feel sane. Thanks Maija, I love your stories (and wish they were fiction)

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Thanks for reading & sharing!!! I wish they were fiction tooooo lollllll!!!

Kai Fiedelholtz's avatar

Interesting. Carvel.

Maija Ariele Fiedelholtz's avatar

Carvel 🙌🙌🙌

Liisa Fiedelholtz's avatar

Love you, love this piece.

Liisa Fiedelholtz's avatar

Oh Tony,